
As Chase graduates, he is proud of his accomplishments. It was not always that way. As a boy, he was bratty and cocky. His parents recognized these behaviors and realized they would not lead to his growing up to be a successful and respectful young man. They started a regimen of weekly hot, soapy enemas. At first Chase protested. He told them he did not need or want an enema. Those complaints did not go far. Some days the spanking he got for refusing resulted in a bottom the shade of red equal to the enema bag. Chase soon learned that protesting the enemas was not in his best interest. Needless to say, they were embarrassing, humiliating, and required him to endure cramping, holding his water, and having his bowels controlled. This regimen worked though and with time, Chase started to devote himself to his studies as well as his love of lacrosse ultimately leading to graduating as valedictorian and being the captain of the lacrosse team and leading them to becoming state champions. Chase’s relationship with enemas also changed. He came to learn their importance. The cramps that he initially protested and even cried over he began to look forward to. He would say, “no pain, no gain.” They became arousing for him and with time, when he was home alone, he would get the bag out and challenge himself to take bigger and soapier enemas. These got paired with strong sexual arousal and he began to experience powerful orgasms. As he prepared his graduation speech, he thought about everyone who supported and guided him, the successes he was able to achieve, and his special relationship with the red bag.

The content of the story was good. The only issue that I had with the story was it could have probably used a good run through with a spell checker. I do not see this as being a complication. But it would have given a little more smoothness to the story.
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Hi! Thanks for your feedback. And yes, not my best proofread job. It was a quick write off my phone, but just the same. I hopefully corrected the issues and will need to be better disciplined which may require a trip to the bathroom. It worked for Chase.
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